Feedback for Sven/Jahmal

1. What did you rate as strengths of the work?
- The camera work, there's a lot of variety in the shots whilst still making sense. The actors did well and I like how you can't see the face of the bad guy.
- Costume, you've represented your characters well using costume and props.
- Setting, the graffiti in the background works well to show the kid is in danger.
2. What did you rate as weaknesses?
- Put some music in, you don't want the sound of footsteps or anything?
3. What do you think the group should change?
- Some more ambient stuff in the background as he walks would be nice, like a cat or people in the park. It seems a little too empty.
4. what has the other group still got to do? e.g. titles, sound, visuals
- Sound and titles.